The Isle of Man is a beautiful place to visit to visit:
Do you know where it is?
Something happens there every year that is extremely dangerous, what is it?
Would you like to travel there? Why?
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I've never heard and watched anything about it, but I'd like to go there.,It's an interesting place which embrace a wide range of things to do, such as sightseeing or enjoying one the most popular motorcycling racing in UK, that is the extremely dangerous event every year.
ReplyDeleteThis is very good, but if you don't mind I'm going to highlight some little mistakes:
DeleteI've never heard OR watched anything about it, but I'd like to go there.It's an interesting place which embraceS a wide range of things to do, such as sightseeing or enjoying one the most popular motorcycling racES, WHICH is the extremely dangerous event TAKING PLACE THERE every year.
One more thing: Could you add your name next time so that I can use this towards increasing your writing mark? Thanks.
Sorry, the isle of Man doesn't belong to the UK, it is a crown dependency.
ReplyDeleteThanks for explaining that, Carlos. I have to confess I didn't find out very long ago.
DeleteIt is between the islands of Ireland and Great Britain. Specifically, it is between Great Britain and Northern Ireland.
ReplyDeleteThe annual event is a car competition happening in the island. I think It could be the most dangerous car competition in the world. As a matter of fact, it is not rare a mortal crash every year.
I haven't ever thought about visiting this island.
As it is said above, it is not a car competition but a motorcycling one. My memory failed. Sorry.
DeleteYou've self-corrected yourself perfectly. Just watching the bikers going past scares me.
DeleteThere's a sentence I'd change: Unfortunately, there is a fatal crash almost every year (or something like that).