The tale is about a caterpillar who eats a lot of tiny pieces of food (healthy or not) and become in a pretty butterfly. i haven't used the strict vocabulary of the tale i've use synonyms.
Thanks so much for your comment and for wishing me a happy birthday, Pilar. It's really sweet of you. Your summary is very good. See some corrections below: - becomes a pretty butterfly - I (never lowercase) - , after tale. Have a lovely day.
Very. Remember to write I with a capital i. Always. We can say the caterpillar is greedy. Do you remember the meaning of greedy? Thanks so much for your comment. Have a nice day.
Hi Miss Mj!
ReplyDeleteThe tale is about a caterpillar who eats a lot of tiny pieces of food (healthy or not) and become in a pretty butterfly. i haven't used the strict vocabulary of the tale i've use synonyms.
PD: Happy birthday!!! ♥
Thanks so much for your comment and for wishing me a happy birthday, Pilar. It's really sweet of you.
DeleteYour summary is very good. See some corrections below:
- becomes a pretty butterfly
- I (never lowercase)
- , after tale.
Have a lovely day.
Hi i'm marina. The caterpillar is very hungry
ReplyDeleteVery. Remember to write I with a capital i. Always.
DeleteWe can say the caterpillar is greedy. Do you remember the meaning of greedy?
Thanks so much for your comment. Have a nice day.