Remember a story must have a beginning, a middle and an end. You can read an example below:
The fat woman stared at Willow. She had beautiful hazel eyes and a sweet face, but her dress was too tight and her hips too wide. She looked sad and tired.
After a while, Willow left. She hated that awful mirror.
'I'm going on a diet,' she told her husband.
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